Monday 27 November 2017

I Wonder

Sometime I wonder,
Why not give U and I, a chance?
Why not play the song and the dance?

But I am afraid,
What if I am scarred?
What if I am again, bard?
Like the many times before.

I am scared of being hurt,
So as to, I have made it an art,
I have recouped the untold span,
I have been stung, but I ran.

So I wonder,yet again
If we gave us a chance,
Will I be able to live in the nuance?

But for now, let us be we,
Because we do not know what is destined to be,
Whatsoever it be,
I just wish U & I be happy.



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7 comments:

  1. Mr Dodo27 November 2017 at 16:50

    I wanted this you know!!

    Every girl have this fear of being in love after falling in with the wrong person.

    I am not saying that the fear is wrong but at least don't pull your believe off love. It's still pure it's still amazing it's still strong if had with the right person.

    I am not judging but I just wanted to say that every guy is different if you gave someone not worthy a chance then what is the problem in giving a chance to a person who is ready to give you everything, for whom you mean the world. On this I can go all day but this is not the place.

    Nice piece. I wanted this sabreen.

    Thank you.

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    1. Sabreen27 November 2017 at 17:20

      Humbled to hear from you each time. Thank you for taking out time to read :)

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    2. Unknown27 November 2017 at 19:06

      Oh my God!! I love it.. You speak my mind..

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  2. Unknown27 November 2017 at 21:31

    Deep😍

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  3. Abhishek Shukla4 December 2017 at 10:14

    This was beautiful, Sabreen :)
    This started an urge in me, to scribble something. Here I go:

    The idea of WE.
    this idea itself,
    I find a beautiful feeling to be.
    It might not occur
    at the moment,
    what transformation
    this idea might take.
    But as long as I believe in it
    I'll not fear,
    to put in my stake.
    Lets try to
    leave behind,
    these lonely You and I
    Lets celebrate this WE
    before we bid
    our last goodbye....

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    1. Sabreen4 December 2017 at 10:27

      No words can describe this. You are amazing Shukla Ji :)

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  4. Unknown12 October 2018 at 04:46

    Hi sweetie
    How are you? Miss you a lot

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